For the glory of Menoth! So that's where this Marek Okon artwork is coming from (Warmachine). Anyway, it's cool, I will randomly point out here that, to my eyes, it looks like "We Make the Set' has a " at the beginning and a ' at the end on the type line. ---Gerrard's Mom Awesome art here! ---Lorgalis Not sure I understand GM's second comment. ---Seeonee I'm not sure, but I think the quotes around We Make the Set in the copyright line don't match. ---Gerrard's Mom Ah! See what you mean now. Fixed. Although I don't think it auto-updates the copyright line. ---Seeonee Now costs 4W to allow room for Kaemirian Healer at 3W. ---Seeonee It's been suggested this be a 2/4; I disagree. We already have one in Vessalian Shoreguard, and looking at other historic white vigilance commons, this card balances fine. It's an Ardent Militia trading 2 toughness for an extremely relevant, repeatable life gain ability. Does it really need more toughness? The only counterargument I can think of is Jedit's Dragoons, which cost 1 more but are 2/5 with fairly decent lifegain. I would have no problem pushing this up to 5W and making it bigger. ---Seeonee We also had two other 2/3s, didn't we? Just a thought, I don't really mind as it is. ---Gerrard's Mom I hate to nitpick, but I've noticed a problem with every render that has a quote attribute. If you just hit [enter] and then type the attribute, it leaves more of a gap than it should. You have to hit [shift] + [enter] to get a "soft" return to make the attribute look correct. Up to you if you want to change them. ---Dragoon Damp towels are commonly referred to in Aegis? ---Gerrard's Mom I didn't know about that, Dragoon, but I will change them; I like the renders to be correct. As for GM's comment: I wrote the flavortext and couldn't think of anything better to put. Suggestions welcome, on that word or the whole blurb. ---Seeonee Taking the idea: "Men facing death at our hands are easily misled by the promises of their false gods." - Connor, Sword of Alisia (that was a suggested title change for him) ---Gerrard's Mom Heh, I think this is the only one where you forgot to fix the quote ;) ---Dragoon Aha, noted. I'll pop out a new render for it next time I'm at my computer. ---Seeonee